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Re: MG haiku

Subject: Re: MG haiku
From: Bill Saidel <saidel@camden.Rutgers.EDU>
Date: Tue, 08 Oct 2002 16:28:50 -0400
I feel like I am straining the English language, and besides, how do you
punctuate these things?

Hot sun, two hour drive
back of head no hair no shade
brilliant  crimson skin.

Oil drops big and dark
MG marks territory
Driveway is defaced.

Smooth act, changing gears
Not always perfect action
Clunks sound in reverse.

This is fun trying to represent a state of mind in 17 syllables.


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