Hey Rick
Bev is pretty good at the editing thing and has done a good job on the
MOWOG. I would say this though, if there is something you really want left
in I would tell her. Since she wasn't there and does not know about us on
this list she may cut something you think should be left in. She has also
has told me in the past that she can spread things out over more than one
issue if needed.
Rich Ball
'76 Midget
Everett, WA
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From: spridgets-bounces@autox.team.net
[mailto:spridgets-bounces@autox.team.net] On Behalf Of Jim Johnson
Sent: Sunday, July 31, 2011 2:23 PM
Cc: spridgets@autox.team.net
Subject: Re: [Spridgets] Midget 50th story for MOWOG
Rick,
Let the editor have at it. Anyone who has written articles can share lots
of stories with you on having their best stuff end up on the editorial
floor. It's just the way it goes. It is a true art to be able to sum up a
3 day event in one page of print and do so accurately. That's why good
journalists are so hard to find... ;-)
Cheers!!
Jim
On Sun, Jul 31, 2011 at 2:09 PM, Rick Bastedo <rbastedo@gmail.com> wrote:
> I was asked to submit something after the trip for printing in our club
> magazine the MOWOG.
> I wrote it up and of course it's about 5 (ok more like 10) times too long.
> There's just so much to say about the 11 day trip, too much for one page.
> The editor has offered to slash, rip, gut, and tear out most of it but
says
> she will try to retain the best bits - those that made her smile or she
> thought were witty.
> Suggestions?
> I'm inclined to just let her do her editing thing then not read it when it
> comes out so as to avoid any negativity on my part, then graciously and
> politely say "thank you".
>
> Rick (SQL scriptwriter, but no author) Bastedo
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